Audience Evaluation - Class Disscusion

In today's lesson, we all watched and gave feedback on each others final pieces. I enjoyed watching my peers final pieces and supplying them with helpful feedback.

We received a variety of feedback:

Positive:

• Slow build of tension
• Really good ambient sounds that creates tension
• The production title fills its function and is good 
• Creates enigma with the dragging of the bag and the mysterious nature of the male antagonist
• The eye at the end of the sequence creates an enigma around the mans identity

 Improvements:

• Some of the shots are too long so there isn't much drama, these need to be shortened or there needs to be more action within them. They get rather boring after a while.
• The addition of ambient and diegetic sounds would improve the quality of the opening sequence. Adding sound effects such as footsteps and wind sounds would improve this.